Stars

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Stars

As I lay here under the stars,
i listen to the whispers in the dark,
Watch the lifelss souls dance across my moonlit sky.
I let the spirits come to take me away,
To a place so secrete i shall not describe.
Now i stare at the stars,
as i say to myself;
" Let the stars be the first and the last to witness crimson spill from my veins! Listen to my wails of pain! And suffer my heart break with lost love and betrayal!"

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bloodyheart97 commented on Stars

12-08-2010

every part was my favorite. this poem made me think of myself... raw emotion

redbloodink commented on Stars

08-22-2010

I think all people can relate... I sure can.... ty for creating this write for me to remember to hold on to my crimson coloured blood and not let it spill in this stormy season I am going through.... write on create on..... red

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

twilightchick’s Poems (31)

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Star Performer 1
Guilt 1
Lights Flicker 2
Broken Drug 4
Lifeless 0
Dissapear 2
Almost Full 0
Stars 2
lifes Journey.. 0
Journey 0
battle 0
Faded Dream 1
mask 2
f*ck fairytales 3
i want 1
innocent 0
wasted hope 2
taylor's death 0
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i wish 0
mirror 0
Cried 0
rememeber 0
her death 0
somebody help me 1
life 1
left behind 0
sad 2
cigarrete 1
staying part2 1
running part1 1