Lightning

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  • iLuvPoetryJACOB
  • Poetry will always emerge out of the shadows of depression, shining like a star in the scarcity of light.

Lightning

I feel the lighting in me,
Flashing in my eyes.
I stand unpredictable,
An unstoppable stream of fire.
I hear the sky shatter beneath my power,
Light up with fear as I burn it.
Coming down to touch the Earth,
I feel it crack beneath me.

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Vampire commented on Lightning

11-27-2009

Energetic and the description of the surge is good. One's anger is a destructve force and the feeling can be that described herein. I can appreciate whats said. Keep it coming....

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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