You Are My Flower

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  • iLuvPoetryJACOB
  • Poetry will always emerge out of the shadows of depression, shining like a star in the scarcity of light.

You Are My Flower

I have filled the needs of this flower’s desire,

Poured water on its dried up leaves.

I’ve moved the sun so it will shine on my flower,

Blown away the clouds so it can shine through.

I’ve danced for the rain to come                         

And then watched the rain clouds float closer.

I made sure they didn’t take their time,

So its thirst is quenched, so its needs are met.

So its petals are soft and vibrant.

You are my flower.

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Paradice21 commented on You Are My Flower

01-09-2010

Very Nice Title and Good Form of Expressions Throughout and Wonderful Write!!‎

iLuvPoetryJACOB

01/10/2010

THANK YOU, I was starting to think nobody liked my poem........

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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