Living In The Past

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    • Poetry will always emerge out of the shadows of depression, shining like a star in the scarcity of light.

    Living In The Past

    These words glint in the morning sunlight,

    Catching the sun’s eye.

    I cannot see, nor can I hear,

    The world seems quite transparent.

    The train had passed,

    Leaving not a trace

    For me to try and follow.

    The door still stands wide open,

    Inviting me, beckoning me,

     But as I walk through,

    Another endless corridor stretches before my eyes.

     

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    ginga commented on Living In The Past

    01-03-2010

    JACOB. I like the randomness of this poem for sure . It has interesting twists and turns leading the reader through a labyrinth of scenes. ginga
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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