Like listening the bird's song

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    Just two coments on this little poem : - I compose it just now, with the true song of a nice bird on my window - I don't have used rhymes because it is a spontaneous poem, not sculpted as I do usually

    Like listening the bird's song

    Like listening the bird's song now at my window

    You came to give me happiness in my own life

    Like seeing the light squirrels jump on branches

    You arrive to bring me the beauty in my heart

     

    Your glance is a true window to your nice soul

    Your shy smile is a real call for loving you more

    Your beautiful mouth is a invitation to kiss you

    Your sweet love fills the big hole in my heart

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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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