Tears

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    Inspired of TEARS III from Aldo Kraas

    Tears

    Why do I cry?

    Why do my tears fall down from my eyes like waterfall?

    Why do you leave me here in the cold?

    Why do season change?

    Why do you leave me to die and freeze to death in the street?

    Why do you accept to be in winter?

    Why do you like my eyes as the sky tearing all the day?

    Why do I cry?

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    tierra7 commented on Tears

    02-08-2013

    A sadness that resonates in many hearts a sad but growin' experience of a heart....nicely written,,,.((((huggz))))Tierra@}-'-,
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    dahlusion commented on Tears

    02-08-2013

    A profound collection of questions that demand immediate answers that only an ex-lover can provide. —bravo! "Why do season change?" —typo on "season" (s)
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    AlainMR

    02/08/2013

    Yes, correct, I have to change that : "Why do seasons change?" I am sorry, I am french and english is not my native language...Some faults are not easy to detect for me

    dahlusion

    02/08/2013

    I am American and still find many typos in my work. They happen to everyone. That's why editors exist. I have one. —smiles))

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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