When I close my eyes...

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    When I close my eyes...

    When I close my eyes, I think of our love

    Your feeling for me is like bird in the sky

    Flying in the air, settles on flowered tree

    Singing a beautiful song for lovers above

     

    When I open my eyes and I think of us

    I see you like red rose near the cactus

    I am the butterfly gathering the flower

    Your cute pistil… We are lovers forever

     

    When I dive my look in your cute eyes

    I see your soul and I love it as a sunrise

    When we are together on white sand

    On beach after a hot night in wild land

     

    When I listen your mind, I see wonders

    To find a very deep true love together

    Unexpected love between two far lovers

    But the strongest romantic love forever

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    poett commented on When I close my eyes...

    02-16-2013

    Nice romantic poem... I love passionate poetry . Hugs
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    kkirkwood commented on When I close my eyes...

    02-14-2013

    A good poem very interesting image cute pistel. That's a great oxymoron.
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    AlainMR

    02/14/2013

    Thank you a lot, I like the word oxymoron, and I am proud you use it for the image 'cute pistil'.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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