We are the poem

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This is a new version of an old poem I had published here, but it had been rewritten and it is longer and I imagine, better. Hope you like it !

We are the poem

 

We are a poem
Written together
With our love
With our life

You are the muse
I am the poet
You are the rhythm
I am the rhyme

We are a poem
Written together
With our words
With our wishes

You are the pixie
I am the watcher
You are the skin
I am the fingers

We are a poem
Written together
With our kisses
With our hugs

You are the word
I am the writing
You are the paper
I am the pencil

We are a poem
Written together
With our soul
With our mind

You are the sun
I am the earth
You are the woman
I am the man

We are the poem
Written together
For our true love
For our real life

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Pietro commented on We are the poem

07-02-2013

Very nice the way this was written, it was very nicely put., I admire the way you write so well in English and the novel way you wrote this, well done, and thanks for the read. Peter

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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