Lilly, fairy

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    I have written first this poem in French and tried to translate it in English. The name of Eve sounds well in French, but not in English. And the translations was not good. Then I have modified the name of Lilly and I have tried now to built the English version not as a translation, but in the same shape, the same imagination, but with other words... In my opinion, they sound like a little song. - New version where I have canceled the french version..

    Lilly, fairy


    Lilly, beautiful as a lily

    Love Lilly, well-made lady

     

    Celebrate Lilly, really sexy

    So sweet, smart and funny

     

    Lively, lily, fairy, sweety Lilly

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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