Live or Die, I question this

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    Live or Die, I question this

    Infinite, forever, will the world always turn
    Time a emblem on a wrist, a wall 
    The rise and set of the sun, the stillness of the moon
    Essential elements are a gift
    Mutant, the creation of man or the image of God
    We build, we destroy, we make life, we take life
    Our natural response is to survive, but we seem to flourish then we self destruct
    Keeping a balance of rotation in life and the world, which one out weighs the spectrum of importance
    A hard one to answer, we are only human
    We look around and look around, who benefits from this future abomination
    Global adversity
    I hold my breath, but the world keeps breathing
    Survival a internal instinct
    Will the world have a natural response to survive us
    Tapeworms are a parasite, feeding and draining it host of its life giving essence.
    Have we figured out the big picture
    Are we the big problem for decline or does our planet have an expiration date 
    One day we all expire
     

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    willieg commented on Live or Die, I question this

    09-30-2009

    wow!!!!!! that was really deep and provocative. great job
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    Alexia commented on Live or Die, I question this

    06-23-2009

    good poem good job you are very talented! makes you think i really enjoyed reading your poem! Thanks for sharing it I will return to read some more
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    Artie commented on Live or Die, I question this

    06-19-2009

    Nice work-- I love the way you unfold the story. I also love the way you brought up the turning of the earh- that's something we all take for granted.
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    Jes

    06/20/2009

    My catagory had to be confussion, because how or what do we see our selves as a whole the complete picture Our final destination Earth verses Man The outcome No one can answer that

    rajeespace commented on Live or Die, I question this

    06-19-2009

    I love this is really amazing and I don't even know what else to say about it, You have a great talent that has no limit. Thanks for sharing your poem with the world
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    Jes

    06/19/2009

    wow Thanks for the complament.

    SuSpence commented on Live or Die, I question this

    06-19-2009

    We are but a virus, and our planet, the host. But just a single host in an infinate galaxy of host planets. Maybe we and the planets are but microscopic cells, and the universe a vast circulatory system for a being so large and great we cannot yet even begin comprehend it. I love the way you think Jes, you stimulate my mind to think.
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    Jes

    06/19/2009

    WOW what a comment truely deep loving it..Tickles me i can stimulate your mind.. Smiling at you Jes

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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