Needed gifted ones

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    Needed gifted ones

    For those who have the gift, give me some of it
    The kind that shatters mirrors, that melts steel
    let me peer in
    Into the world that hides from me
    The fences are white, the decor is set
    Roses on the table, a sign of love
    Can I enter your soul, take over your body, live your life
    Will it some up the question for me
    Everything has order, but does that everything involve me
    Holding out my hands out for crumbs
    I sit and ponder
    Flipping this life over, reading it in reversal
    The opposite of the mirror
    My rights, my left
    Is that the reality I need or want
    To leave my chaotic disorder
    To abandon my demons from hell
    Sit and wait for my knight in armor on a white horse at that
    I think reality is my best recourse
    Eating me, feeding me, spitting me out
    I educate again
    Love is given freely too many time, choose wisely
    It will consume you, abuse you , suck the life from your body and spit you out
    Gifted be aware the dark needs your light
    So shine for me

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    Artie commented on Needed gifted ones

    06-17-2009

    I really, really like this!!! Every now and then you read something that comes from a person's core, and I believe this is one of those times. 10 from me.
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    Jes

    06/18/2009

    My core is deep my friend There are so many different layers to me, that I keep myself busy peeling them away searching for the one that satiates my thirst Thanks Jes

    bforibus commented on Needed gifted ones

    06-16-2009

    i diffently enjoyed this write. it was more so philisophical then dark. i was drawn in either way. very good job.
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    DeepEclipse commented on Needed gifted ones

    06-15-2009

    I like how this poem challenges its own limits. I relate to it's hunger for growth, it's desire to pierce the mystery.
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    Jes

    06/16/2009

    I like your comments hunger for growth.. sits and waits for the time to pounce..Smiling Jes

    WordSlinger commented on Needed gifted ones

    06-12-2009

    This original, reminds of one trying to get out of a haunted house, the trapped feeling, but so tired of it, decides to not fight, but laugh at it., Interesting write..
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    Jes

    06/12/2009

    I like dark things. Thing I don't understand inside myself, the thoughts. Digging deep inside dragging the demons with me haha Smile Jes Glad u think it interesting

    SuSpence commented on Needed gifted ones

    06-08-2009

    This is a very good poem, but it makes me sad. You must hold on to hope. Some have died for love, others have fought entire wars in the name of love, it brings out the best and worst in mankind, much like religion. For me Love is my religion, I live for it, long for it, pray to its alter each day, waiting for the day it speaks to me, the day I am saved. Until my time comes I wait, clinging to hope for it is all that is left. From now until then, I will share with you all that you need, and I always will I leave you a rose @~~~~~
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    Jes

    06/08/2009

    Love is a universal word.. i have to digg deep into myself...But I will find her... LOVE..I love the rose. I smile deeply Jes

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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