Time has come

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    Time has come

    Am I doing the right things
    Will it take us under
    Am I seeing clear
    What's the cause, the causes run deep
    A man I met, he turned my head with his words so true
    With only words, he took my breath away
    So I sit, depicting circumstances, thinking
    Am I seeing clearly
    Could this be the end of the end or a long wait to a new beginning
    Nows the time for the answer
    So I wait
    No it's been knocking
    At first softly tapping, barely being heard
    Is the door hard enough or will it give in
    Wanting to see me with it's curious eyes
    Waiting for the answer
    My thoughts and emotions are doomed
    Nature's rule answers let go of the catalyst who could steal your heart
    Let yourself, see you first
    It's time to wait, I pause
    Time holds the answers
    Good bye sweet dream
    Hoping you enter my slumber
    So I can steal some of your peace
    Share one peace
    One Day

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    BDIsernhagen commented on Time has come

    06-04-2009

    "Good bye sweet dream Hoping you enter my slumber So I can steal some of your peace Share one peace One Day" wonderful lines, and if no one can relate to this poem, I'm sure they can atleast relate to these lines.
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    Jes

    06/04/2009

    Hey been busy today just posted another one "The truth of me" Tell me what u think. I like what your saying so far :) Jes

    dahlusion commented on Time has come

    06-04-2009

    Though a good write, this is a very personal poem that does not touch me because I have never felt this way or have never thought, "My thoughts and emotions are doomed".
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    Jes

    06/04/2009

    Doomed meaning no which way I turn someone or I will hurt emotionally

    btaylord25

    06/24/2009

    im with dalusion, on how what he commmented on your poem, um its nice but i didnt feel it either, although i can say that the title has cought my eye thats a good thing even if the poem dont pull who so ever reads it in . . .

    SuSpence commented on Time has come

    06-04-2009

    Great poem, you asked me to give my honest and true feelings, but it is easier for me to do this with poetry. So I just sent you my reply.
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    jasonbourne1234 commented on Time has come

    06-04-2009

    Good poem, a bit too deep for me to comprehend, but nevertheless it was good..
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    Jes

    06/04/2009

    I guess I am alittle deep minded Thanks Jes

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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