"Love Application Denied"

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    When I woke up I had a couple things on my mind... And 1 thought was sometimes LOVE can be a full-time job... There are qualifications, requirements,etc... And sometimes u just dnt apply...

    "Love Application Denied"

    So I close my eyes... 2 picture you by my side...
    But you are... And still my heart and my mind collide...
    Someone so close 2 me has died...
    Killed by insecurity and pride...
    2 love you was the postion... Only if i'd applied...
    Every time I put in my application, it was denied...
    So I ask what are the qualifications? Can you be my guide...
    To make you happy... Make you feel good inside...
    Let not your anger hide...
    Although you try not to show it... You do each & every time...
    And everything I have tried... But maybe not...
    Cause my skills still leave you unsatisfied...
    And no more can I cry... Cause my tears have all dried...
    Let not insecurity and pride be the reason we divide...
    Greatness in our relationship always we should strive...
    But it's not gonna happen if each & every time we continue to backslide...

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    klassik commented on "Love Application Denied"

    07-07-2010

    Nice style, poet! .
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    smartrissa commented on "Love Application Denied"

    04-26-2010

    That was good. i liked it alot! its full of emotion
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    MalikPeterson commented on "Love Application Denied"

    04-24-2010

    Sorry it took me so long to get over here...it has been hectic lately. Now to the piece. I like it. It is a new take on love and the falling in and out and the other battles we have with it. I had never looked at it this way...but it is quite true. Sometimes someone else is ready to fall in love and you just aren't making that connection...so one is happier in the relationship than the other. I see your application...and I grant you Kudos :)
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    haskins commented on "Love Application Denied"

    04-20-2010

    Great poem. I like the story behind it. Good job.
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    Phoenix9 commented on "Love Application Denied"

    04-18-2010

    A Fantastic write, great flow and message, If only the other person could know your feelings, truely know, would that , could that change their mind, love is never that easy, but we all try a solid 10
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    KShanay

    04/18/2010

    Thnx....

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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