Mad

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    Mad

     I am mad... I can't forget you...
    Stuck in my mind and in my heart...
    Why not forget you...
    No... I am mad because I have this pain inside....
    And I can't let it out...
    Cause inside my life I don't want people to be able to take a ride...
    To judge me or to judge you...
    And look @ me still should I care...
    The pain and the tears are there...
    I am mad... I can't erase you...
    Cause if I could I wouldn't feel what I feel right now from you...
    I.... am.... Mad....
    Mad at myself... for being too true...
    Mad at myself for gettin' into you...
    Mad at myself for laying down with you...
    Mad at myself because of you...
    I am mad....
    And right now I could be talkin' out of anger...
    But I am mad right now...
    Mad cause I should have left you a stranger....
    Tears released from my eyes...
    I am sorry... But I have so many emotions going through me right now...
    I am mad... Angry.... Sad... Furious... Shocked...
    I wanna talk... But I can't feelin' like this...
    When it's gone then we can talk...
    But right now I am mad... But most of all sad...

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    jesterescapade commented on Mad

    05-06-2010

    Great feeling. You convey the inner you at the time very well. Icould have gotten mad for you.
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    smartrissa commented on Mad

    05-06-2010

    That was wonderful. I liked it... it shows that you werent even able to compleatly figure out what to do. it shows that you are strong.
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    JaleesaSoco commented on Mad

    05-06-2010

    I feel the straight up honesty in this poem... I still go through that phase of feeling mad. It's out of my mind for the most part but still fresh enough to be there and pop up every now and then. And with mad comes sad. Girl, I'm proud that you came out and said how you feel. Continue the work ms. lady! Love and Blessings!~
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    Crush commented on Mad

    05-04-2010

    "mad at myself for being too true / mad at myself for gettin' into you..." i liked these two lines the most....good show...bravo !
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    SuSpence commented on Mad

    05-04-2010

    Another nice write, and again Bikeman beat me to it haha. I will check back on you for sure. I'm impressed. -Spence
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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