Unforgettable

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    Unforgettable

     Have I done such things in my past that are unforgettable...
    Am I not aloud to make mistakes where I could be forgotten...
    Unforgettable, my mistakes are....
    Should I have everything taken away from me because of my unforgettable past???
    Or should I be able 2 learn from my mistakes, move on and never look back???
    But how can I, when people in this world make it seem as if past matter and it can't be forgotten...
    Unforgettable, my mistakes are...
    I never blame anyone for the things I have done in my past...
    And I don't think I am perfect...
    But hell, since i've done so much wrong in the past, why not hold it against me...
    Because my mistakes are unforgettable right???
    Maybe even unforgivable...
    Past don't suppose to matter because it can't be changed...
    Either learn from your mistakes and move on or to the past forever be chained...
    Unforgettable, my mistakes are...
    Why not be unforgiven...

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    BikemanRJ commented on Unforgettable

    03-25-2010

    Learn from your mistakes look forward and never look back. Gods grace is sufficient enough to look past them One man died for all of the mistakes we have made. Let that Grace be the words that flow from your thoughts and lips. God Bess BIkemanRJ
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    charmlessman2d commented on Unforgettable

    03-22-2010

    i'm a regular 9 to 5 boy who spends his lunch breaks eating fast food and watching Maury Povich. And the sissy boy inside me that cries everytime Maury reveals that the guy IS THE FATHER and he then professes to take care of the fatherless child, it always breaks my heart. a guy like that with a crazy past of cheating and sleeping with the baby momma's cousin and what not should be forgiven if he stands up for the child and declares to take care of him. great poem. heartfelt. so true.
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    KShanay

    03/25/2010

    Thankyou...

    sandro007 commented on Unforgettable

    03-06-2010

    I like the theme behind it. thins is a really fine poem...
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    KShanay

    03/14/2010

    Thankyou.... Please Read my poem "When"... And let me know your thoughts on that 1...

    saskiab1971 commented on Unforgettable

    02-24-2010

    very nice poem. I can really relate to this poem. But many people have really messed up and the Lord says forgive them or He will not forgive you. This is what we must remember.
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    KShanay

    02/25/2010

    Thankyou, I agree 100%.... No matter what it is God said they should be forgiven 7 times if so....

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