jesterescapade commented on The known

05-06-2010

Another great expression of your emotions. I can feel the hurt and isolation. Very good read.

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smartrissa commented on The known

05-06-2010

i think it was really good. i enjoyed it. i relate it it agreat deal... you did good.

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JaleesaSoco commented on The known

05-06-2010

Oh...my...God... You hit on the feeling that ran through me and will possibly run through me again. I had a friend too. But we went alittle farther than that into uncharted territories. Man... what can I say? I feel this poem. You created some kind of magic! It's just one of those poems. And being that I can relate and behind that feel...where you are coming from is amazing. We release when others release. And the question at the end I ask myself if not everyday, when I happen to think about that person it's bound to be asked. Great job.

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JamilahAyanna commented on The known

05-04-2010

Every gurl I believe has felt lyke dis at one poitn or anotha and I feel lyke da last line wuz da strongest bcuz it spoke 2 me da most, it's very hard 2 let go of the one u love and dis brought back old feelings and memories, it wuz sensual and well written....

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SuSpence commented on The known

05-04-2010

A very emotional write KShanay. Bikeman summed it up perfectly. I really liked this poem, and was left feeling sad for you. Remember what Bob Marley said, 'Don't worry, about a thing...Cause every little thing, is gonna be alright' haha. And remember it is about what was wrong with him, not you. -Spence

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