Tears(A cry out 4 Love)

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Woke up early this morning... Feeling like this... Couldn't stop my tears...

Tears(A cry out 4 Love)

Tears fill my eyes... I feel I do everything I can...
I don't want a broken heart...
This hurting feeling, I do not understand...

I feel so low at times... Like I am doing nothing right....
How do I get rid of this feeling... Can I get rid of this feeling...
God please shine your light...

There are points where I wanted 2 give up...
And I have packed my things...
But I stayed because my love 4 him is ridiculous...

I don't tryda make it seem as if I am perfect...
That I am not... This I know...
I... I am.... Imperfect...

But can someone look @ me and appreciate me...
Even knowing my wrongs...
And know that I try my best 2 be the best I can be...

See me when I am acting Ugly...
When I have a bad attitude...
But still seem 2 see beauty...

Tears roll down my face...
"where's da love"...
But it seems from me he wants space...

Tears fill my eyes...
Tears roll down my face...
Tears of sadness...Tears of love...
Tears of pain... 

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JaleesaSoco commented on Tears(A cry out 4 Love)

05-21-2012

I can feel your saddness and emotion in this poem. I think we've all been there. Thank you for sharing that very intimate part of you. Blessings!

jesterescapade commented on Tears(A cry out 4 Love)

03-31-2010

Wonderful way to convey your feelings. Keep writing, it is good therapy, and it makes others think, and some of us get to gelight in the artfully written words.

KShanay

04/01/2010

Thankyou... I agree...

BikemanRJ commented on Tears(A cry out 4 Love)

03-25-2010

I can very much relate to this poem and feel both the pain and the love but some things in life are worth it if he loves you he will return to you but until then just keep shown the love Sister God Bless BikemanRJ

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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