Love-hate murder

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A relationship between a girlfriend and a boyfriend

Love-hate murder



"I love you." She thought as she clutched his bloody shirt with her trembling hands.

He looked so small beneath her. His blood slowly pooled around his shoulders from a wound dug deep in his chest. His shirt was torn and frayed around the edges - the knife had been too dull.

"I wish you didn't break my heart ... but yours will do for now."

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Love-hate murder 0
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Murder 0
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Bloody mess 0
Tears 0
Not what I need 1
Vampire 1
The endless cycle 1
Dying 0
Forget 0
Untitled 0
You did it 1
You are my nightmare 1
Still 2
Immortilized 1
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