Loving Stranger

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Loving Stranger

How can he love me so?
When I'm someone he barely knows?
His soft whispers of caresses,
makes me take leave of my senses.
the way he holds me makes me forever wonder.
Where did I go right?
How did he manage to guide me out of the darkest night I call my life?
How could he possibly know,
that on the inside, I was dying?
How did he know, beyond my cheerful mask,
I was crying?
I'm not perfect, not even remotely near,
but for some reason he stays at my side and wipes away all my tears.
All my life, I've known this could be a danger,
but it's hard not to love my loving stranger.

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Godsgang commented on Loving Stranger

07-04-2009

Where is any ryhme.? Where is the point of this writing? Where is any passion? a poem should roll off the lips or pull the heartstrings! very sorry but try again

Layla

07/06/2009

sorry but I'm a very young poet and this is so new to me but I love doing it. The point of the poem is that There is someone I barely know yet I love him even though I've been hurt so many times before.As for the passion, you have to know me to see that it is in fact there. I don't mind your constructive critisicm because hopefully comments like this will make me a better poet thanks for your input:)

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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