Lust for poetry

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I used a little creativity to express what it means to win. After all we are all writing because we want to win... I had a lot of fun with this poem. I hope you all like it....Thanks to all that take the time to read and rate my poems. 14u2

Lust for poetry

Lonely years,
Written on my face.
Lost without love,
I try to replace.
Taken by her lust,
My choices were bad.
Flowing tears,
Cause times are sad.
 
Melting in sorrow,
Running low on strife.
My wishful thinking,
Is dreaming of a wife.
Patience is a virtue,
I find not.
Faith and understanding,
Is my plot.

Writing my poetry,
It flows from within.
This is my only love,
I have to win.
"Let go of lust",
Say's the man above.
So now I am faithful,
To my poetry love.

Writing my future,
Passing the time.
All of my poetry,
It has to rhyme.
Symmetrical ways,
Are planted inside.
My poetry tells all,
Nothing to hide.

God! help my ratings,
Nothing means more.
Please give me the highest,
Original Poetry score.
I gave up lust,
No longer a sinner.
All I ask is to be,
A poetry winner.....

By Ron Evans Jr 2010

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cheronld commented on Lust for poetry

08-11-2010

This was really cute....somehow I am sure you will get your uhh lust of a wish....lol...I look forward to reading the journey along the way.....Cher

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

14u2’s Poems (10)

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Lust for poetry 1
Her Paintbrush 1
My Paintbrush 0
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Lifting Up Jesus 0
All My Faith Is In You 1
YOUR FRIEND JESUS 3
The Lines Of Tears 0
Within Myself 1
The Nead For Healing 1