My Paintbrush

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    This poem I wrote to a friend ,It always made my wonder how a woman could take two hours everyday to get herself ready for the day. That commitment Why! Until I better understood her and realized she had some self confidence issues, and she also had some self worth issue's. So everyday she would paint her face to her liking, and hide the true feelings inside. the true issues were in her.

    My Paintbrush

     My Paintbrush is my best friend
    It detects when people are untrue
    When I need to cover my feelings
    It hides them from showing through

    Self seeking people only care for themselves
    They will hurt you if they can
    They try to hurt you for no reason
    And say you are the problem at hand

    So I take my Paintbrush with me
    Where ever I may go
    In case I need to cover up
    So my feelings will not show

    Its not that I am fake
    Or that I feel I need to hide
    But I really need to trust you
    Before you see me deep inside

    I would like to let go of my fears
    And leave them far behind
    But my Paintbrush is my friend
    And good friends are hard to find!!!!

    I think you will truly love me!
    So I will be, truly honest with you?
    My Paintbrush will stay with me
    UNTIL I LEARN.... TO LOVE ME TO....

    Ron Evans Jr. 2010 copywrite

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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