May the 14th

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    May the 14th

    I saw the most beautiful

    Girl on this very special

    Day,

     

    For now on May the 14th

    Will be known as you take my

    Breathe away day,

     

    It will be similar to Valentines

    Day, but with more gifts given

    Away,

     

    And it should be a world holiday,

    It least a month and a

    Day. 

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    MistyDawn commented on May the 14th

    06-03-2009

    Your words are sweet.... I certainly hope she knows how you feel. And I hope she feels the same...Love deserves a chance

    cupid2010

    06/06/2009

    Well Misty it did not workout between me and her as of yet. I am actually looking for someone else, but I still want to publish this book I wrote for her.

    Nicoella commented on May the 14th

    06-03-2009

    i like the topic, recording a day as you did. there are only a few days in life that would make u write a poem like this. I like the idea. --Nicoella

    cupid2010

    06/16/2009

    Yeh nicoella it was an awesome relationship that did not work out.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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