The First Time

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    The First Time

      

    The first time I saw you on that

    Day,

    You took my breath

    Away,

     

    That day was the pinnacle of my life I

    Say,

    But then I got to know you

    Better as each day,

     

    Progressed and then I have to

    Say,

    That not much has changed

    As of today,

     

    Your still unbelievable I

    Say,

    And you still take my

    Breath away.

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    fallenangel74 commented on The First Time

    06-12-2009

    This one says a lot to me. It would be awesome to feel or be felt about this way! Not that I've never loved or been in love but just to take someones breath away....WOW!

    Applepie commented on The First Time

    06-09-2009

    Sweet, I like the fact that you can still be and want to be in love with someone even after you've been together for years.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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