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    I wrote this during a dark part of my life... going through major trails and just not sure what to do with my life.
    Written:  2/04/09

    ME

     I am not sure if faith is enough anymore
    My life feels like a joke more than ever before
    I feel as though I am spinning out of control
    And no one really cares anymore

    I sit and wonder why all this is happening to me
    This year has started out at the worst place ever
    With everything falling apart all around me
    And feeling like I have no place to go

    My life is a joke with no hope anymore
    Not sure what I can do to get out of all of this
    Heading forward just to get pushed back down
    Not sure what the point is anymore

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    Jeannie’s Poems (54)

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    YOU 0 09/19/2009
    ME 0 09/19/2009
    Why Me?? 0 07/11/2009
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    this guy 0 04/03/2009
    Love Sucks... 0 04/03/2009
    Life 0 03/31/2009
    MyDay 0 03/31/2009
    A Friend 0 03/31/2009
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    Happiness 0 03/31/2009
    People are Always Around Us 0 03/31/2009
    People Come into Our Lives 1 03/31/2009
    Looking for a Dream 0 03/31/2009
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    The Window... 0 03/28/2009
    I sit.... 0 03/28/2009
    Alone 0 03/28/2009
    SLEEP 0 03/28/2009
    I Wonder 1 03/28/2009
    There is... 0 03/28/2009
    Hope & Faith 0 03/28/2009
    Waiting.... 0 03/28/2009
    you 0 03/28/2009
    To Play 0 03/28/2009
    nothing for me 0 03/28/2009
    Our Friends 0 03/28/2009
    Darken Place 0 03/28/2009
    thoughts.. 0 03/28/2009
    The Empty Room 1 03/28/2009
    Friends.... 1 03/28/2009
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    Us together 2 02/05/2009
    what we can handle 1 02/05/2009
    Life changes.... 2 02/05/2009
    that Someone Special 0 02/05/2009
    it does not matter 1 02/05/2009
    more out there 2 02/05/2009
    having faith.... 0 02/05/2009
    outside my room 0 02/05/2009
    to be set free 2 02/05/2009
    What I am looking for.... 3 02/05/2009
    Life overwhelming.
    ...    		 1 02/05/2009
    Life.... 3 02/05/2009
    the darkness... 3 02/05/2009
    My Favorite Cair 0 02/05/2009
    doubt... 2 02/05/2009
    you & me 2 02/05/2009
    Did I...... 0 02/05/2009
    nothing...... 1 02/05/2009
    YOU 1 11/07/2008
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