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    • Jeannie
    • is just here.... plain and simple

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    I wrote this when I had someone specil in my life very breifly.  I never shared this with him... but maybe I should have.

    YOU

     I thought about you today
    when i took the kids to play

    Wondered if you are really real
    wishing you were very near

    I sit and think of what could be
    just between you and me

    I can feel  myself faling for you
    just not sure of what to do

    Do you know the smiles you bring
    with the simple thoughts of you and me

    I have hope agian with you
    and I know time and faith will  pull us through

    thank you for what you've done
    brought big rays straight from the sun

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Jeannie’s Poems (54)

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    The Dance Instructor 0 10/06/2009
    Does it matter? 0 09/19/2009
    YOU 0 09/19/2009
    ME 0 09/19/2009
    Why Me?? 0 07/11/2009
    Who I am.... 0 07/11/2009
    I am just Me 0 04/05/2009
    this guy 0 04/03/2009
    Love Sucks... 0 04/03/2009
    Life 0 03/31/2009
    MyDay 0 03/31/2009
    A Friend 0 03/31/2009
    Who Am I? 0 03/31/2009
    Happiness 0 03/31/2009
    People are Always Around Us 0 03/31/2009
    People Come into Our Lives 1 03/31/2009
    Looking for a Dream 0 03/31/2009
    When We Move On... 0 03/28/2009
    The Window... 0 03/28/2009
    I sit.... 0 03/28/2009
    Alone 0 03/28/2009
    SLEEP 0 03/28/2009
    I Wonder 1 03/28/2009
    There is... 0 03/28/2009
    Hope & Faith 0 03/28/2009
    Waiting.... 0 03/28/2009
    you 0 03/28/2009
    To Play 0 03/28/2009
    nothing for me 0 03/28/2009
    Our Friends 0 03/28/2009
    Darken Place 0 03/28/2009
    thoughts.. 0 03/28/2009
    The Empty Room 1 03/28/2009
    Friends.... 1 03/28/2009
    and time goes on.... 2 02/05/2009
    Us together 2 02/05/2009
    what we can handle 1 02/05/2009
    Life changes.... 2 02/05/2009
    that Someone Special 0 02/05/2009
    it does not matter 1 02/05/2009
    more out there 2 02/05/2009
    having faith.... 0 02/05/2009
    outside my room 0 02/05/2009
    to be set free 2 02/05/2009
    What I am looking for.... 3 02/05/2009
    Life overwhelming.
    ...    		 1 02/05/2009
    Life.... 3 02/05/2009
    the darkness... 3 02/05/2009
    My Favorite Cair 0 02/05/2009
    doubt... 2 02/05/2009
    you & me 2 02/05/2009
    Did I...... 0 02/05/2009
    nothing...... 1 02/05/2009
    YOU 1 11/07/2008
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