Moments of silence

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    Moments of silence

    I heard the wind
    Singing in an unusual voice,
    Closing my eyes
    left me dreaming.
    I couldn't hold back
    My flowing tears,
    Looking at her
    In this wooden box
    She is more ralaxed and happier
    Being far away
    From this wicked World
    that tormented her peaceful life
    Her predicament,She loves Children
    But had none
    She was loved by many
    But her fruitlessness
    broght hatred to her
    Who would blame her?
    She is destined to be unfortunate
    She counted herself Lucky
    When the cold hands of death
    Snatched her to the great beyond
    Now,none can question her childlessness
    No one can even accuse her
    Of being a man
    Her mind is at rest
    For she has faded from
    the face of the earth
    Observing her silent moment.

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    connsk8 commented on Moments of silence

    06-27-2009

    I was mesmorized by the story and the love the story teller had for the one that passed, beautiful tribute, I loved the style and the words, they touched my heart..

    Hampton commented on Moments of silence

    06-20-2009

    A beautiful and reverent writing in a simple style that grasps the reader and leads them forward...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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