Storm's Over

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    Peaceful exit is meant for those who believe and live the life of holiness,a blameless and spotless life,are you sure of your destination lf you die tomorrow?

    Storm's Over



    A strong wind has blown
    pulling down a mighty wall
    That held the nation's peace
    A virtuous woman she was
    Lived a life of virtual reality
    Though It was a peaceful exit
    Gone far from this world
    To a resting place
    The soil ought to live
    On the legacy she left
    For her to be at rest
    Modesty is one of many
    Righteous was her priority
    She knows the cause
    Of travelling through
    Such an unforgivenable road
    To a destructive destination
    So,She imbibe such a legacy

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    spbsdude commented on Storm's Over

    10-15-2009

    It is hard to lose a loved one, but we can take solace in the knowledge that when the srorm is over, our souls live on. Nice job.
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    Strider commented on Storm's Over

    07-31-2009

    I am sorry if you lost someone and you are trying to tell us her legacy or this is simply you expressing an opion on how we should exit this world. Whichever it is, it is a good poem.
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    Charity

    07/31/2009

    I am actually passing a message,thanks

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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