Mommy, where did you go??

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    Mommy, where did you go??
    Mommy, mommy where did you go,
    I turned and you weren't there,
    You left me for your drugs
    I wondered if you cared.

    Mommy, mommy why'd you lie?
    You turned your back on me,
    I was positive that our relationship
    was a long garantee.

    Mommy, mommy times have changed you into...
    I don't know,
    I wonder where my mommy went
    and why she had to go.

    Mommy, mommy how are you
    and who your friend today?
    You swap "friends" like a deck of cards
    and act like it's okay.

    Mommy, mommy when have relations
    been more at ther ends,
    I'm giving up I'm letting go
    of my mommy & my friend.

    Written by:
    Jasmin J. Simon

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    joker88 commented on Mommy, where did you go??

    02-27-2009

    I see that this is a portion of another one of your poems. I gave it a "9". I would have gave it a "10" but you need to spell check and fix a few words, overall a great poem.
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