To love you

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    To love you

    To love you is to hate all,
    To bow down and take the fall,
    To get back up and try again,
    I shall not let my faith cave in,
    For if I do, I have lost all my hopes and dreams,
    I can not live without these things,
    I cannot fly and spreed my wings,
    For faith is all I got
    Do you love me or do you not.

    Written by:
    'Little Jazz'
    Jasmin J. Simon

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    BrielleC commented on To love you

    02-27-2009

    Great piece very strong message.

    joker88 commented on To love you

    02-27-2009

    Nice flow with a great imagery. A sense of direction for what you want for yourself, well done.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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