music man


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    music man

    as i watched the music man
    let his crooning carry me away
    saw the distant look in his eyes
    felt his words like an embrace
    as i sang with music man
    we sang of of all the beauty
    felt what he was feeling then
    something had consumed me
    standing in a sea of same
    calm washed over us in waves
    as the music man just played
    and sang to us that day

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    SuSpence commented on music man


    This was beautiful and melodic. Do you write music? I could easily see this being the first amazing verse to an amazing song. (I hear your song in my head now as I type) -Spence

    bforibus commented on music man


    this simplicity and beauty wrapped up in one tightly wound ball. i dont mean simple in word play because thats obviously not it, but just the gesture of the subject. great job oon this. i loved it

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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