My 2nd Haiku

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  • Butterfly49
  • is going to miss the best poem-writing buddy ever! Hoping he will still visit here now and again.

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For my special friend that knows how to appreciate it.

My 2nd Haiku

AUTUMN LEAVES FALLING
A CHILLING WIND IN THE AIR
   - FRIENDS SAYING FAREWELL

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Hampton commented on My 2nd Haiku

11-04-2009

Nice work. I am not a big fan of Haiku but I applaud those that are as they continue to develop their skills in this style of writing,

Butterfly49

11/05/2009

This came to me in my sleep. Oddly, many of my poems do. Written for my friend, Will28, when he informed me of his leaving here for home, 1710 miles away.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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