SOLDIER'S REMORSE
Crying for others
Fathers and brothers
Strong in mind
Yet seeing behind
Knowing what's right
Regretting the might
Seeing the toll
Hating your soul
Continue to be driven
and know you are forgiven.
SOLDIER'S REMORSE
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- Butterfly49
- is going to miss the best poem-writing buddy ever! Hoping he will still visit here now and again.
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Hampton commented on SOLDIER'S REMORSE
06-13-2009
- A gently done work that decribes the feelings that those called to serve feel as they look back at past deeds.
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06/16/2009
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