My aging Father

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I wrote this as if from my Father's perspective...He's nearly 75, and a recluse. He loves being alone in his house for the most part, but doesn't enjoy being lonely. He sees family members in his house that aren't really there, and he has such an awful memory problem! I love him dearly though, and I talk to him every day via telephone. Oh yeah, and he wishes for death to go home to his heavenly Father.

My aging Father

OF ALL THE THINGS I THINK I'VE TOSSED,
AND PONDERING THE THINGS I'VE LOST.
IT COMES TO MIND WHAT MAY BE LEFT
IS GREY MATTER SLIGHTLY HALF BEREFT
OF THINGS THAT SHOULD BE LEFT IN TACT,
BUT NOW ARE SCATTERED MATTER-OF-FACT.
IT'S ONLY NOW THAT I'M QUITE AWARE
THAT I DROOL A LOT, THEN SIT AND STARE
AT PEOPLE COMING INTO MY HOUSE,
BUT DISAPPEAR WHEN I LOOK ABOUT.
THE HOBBIES THAT WERE FOND TO ME
ARE NOW BUT A FORGONE MEMORY.
MY FAMILY'S GROWN AND ON THEIR OWN
AND SO I SIT HERE QUITE ALONE

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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