Pray to God

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    Pray to God
    I wish someone cared
    about how I feel.
    Sometimes it hurts
    when nothing seems real.

    The same things happen
    day in, and day out...
    never making a change
    and my life is in doubt.

    As I look to the sky,
    I pray to God...
    "Whatever happened
    on this road I trod"?

    I then get a message
    from him up above...
    "Pray to me child
    and I'll show you my love.

    You're unique in your ways,
    you're special to me...
    just don't give up,
    and I'll help you to see

    That life is worth more
    than you're feeling today.
    Just pray to me child,
    and I'll show you the way".

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    kaddeesh commented on Pray to God

    09-17-2009

    Encouraging and uplifting! I appreciate your openess and honesty in this piece.
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    litilraven

    09/18/2009

    Thanks. At the time I was very depressed, and it uplifted me to write it. I think the messege was heaven-sent.

    SAYANDSEE commented on Pray to God

    11-29-2008

    THE TRUTH IT IS. IT WAS EXACTLY WHAT I NEEDED IN THIS VERY MOMENT. HEAVEN SENT. THANK YOU!
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    litilraven

    09/18/2009

    I'm glad it has helped you. As humans, we all go through very similar things in our lives, and it's worth it when you know it has touched someone else. there's always a better tomorrow, even if you can't see it coming :)

    stormimartin commented on Pray to God

    11-25-2008

    Very well written. I enjoyed reading it!
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    litilraven

    09/18/2009

    thank you :) I intend to read everyone's poems that has commented on mine...it might take me a bit to get to....I didn't even see this until now, and I apologize for that. My life has been very turbulant, but for the better. I will get to your poetry soon :)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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