Naked Beauty

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    Naked Beauty

    You step from the shower,
    feeling so much power
    Drying your body...
    wrapped in a towel
    Such a beautiful site,
    my eyes have never seen
    My heart I fite...
    a love to redeem
    You stand before me,
    without your clothes
    You lay beside me,
    more like a thorn...
    ...less like a rose
    Your body is naked,
    but not your soul
    Your heart is hiding...
    your heart is cold
    Showing on the outside,
    what people  see...
    Hiding on the inside,
    you can never be free
    What do you hide,
    beneath your naked skin,
    your soul inside...
    your heart within...
    Hiding behind
    a naked body...
    hiding the real you...
    Pretending to be,
    what people want to see
    ...pretending to be,
    what you want to be
    Shed the fear,
    you hide inside...
    Nobody knows,
    the real you...
    Shed the cloak
    ...you hide behind
    There's a you,
    ...hiding inside
    A heart you will find...
    a soul that's true...
    Set it free...
    a naked beauty...
    that others can see...

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    nosyrosy81 commented on Naked Beauty

    08-31-2009

    hi there!.....we hide ourselves when we feel vunerable.....but the eyes can say it all.......i like this....to love someone truely,we have to bare our soul.....like the way you have yours.

    HarverTomsson commented on Naked Beauty

    08-31-2009

    The thing about the Woodstock generation is that we have managed to take the fig leaf off the genitals and put it over the mind. Who really knows us for who we are? Even sex has lost its ability to create intimacy since most of us rush there first as fast as we can.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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