No more straw

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    No more straw
    The truth is you don't know me
    You don't know what Ive been through
    You talk a lot but your a phony
    You have never been tried and true
    You use to think I was your pony
    This rides over now were through
    You thought you pulled one over on me
    But you didn't think I knew
    Its not your fault the shame was on me
    But now its off so shame on you.
    And to your multiple personality
    Fuck this fuck them and fuck you too.

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    Robin commented on No more straw

    03-04-2009

    Wow she used you and hurt you, I feel in this one your angry not only at the one who hurt you but at everyone...very good...
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    lizard760 commented on No more straw

    02-23-2009

    i really like this poem. i have felt that way many times before. very good job
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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