Notes softly fall like tears!

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    The world was framed with words and it may be destroyed by it too.

    Notes softly fall like tears!

    do' I hear him fall through bars of heavens notes,
    without a cry he fell quietly and all watched mute
    tumbling with an angry re' for losing love and grace
    mi' missing his way he fell into the deeps embrace

    he fell fa' from that safe heaven called home
    so' lucky he was that he fell but not alone
    la' laughing were the winds that made us sleep
    ti' till it bore him out of sight and into the deep

    do' time flies past we cannot but still recall
    that horrible sight of his shocking fall
    seeing this fall happen in the lives of a few
    whose fall are history that none should pursue

    I remember his fall through the bars of homely notes
    where we stood to learn it's good to be atimes mute.

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    Rhymer commented on Notes softly fall like tears!

    09-09-2010

    Sweet notes hi-lighting an excellent poem. Enjoyed the read........

    che234

    10/01/2010

    Thank you very much Rhymer, your comment lifted my soul.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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