Oh, To Be Wrong

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    Oh, To Be Wrong

     Am I wrong...
    To desire someone in my life's square
    to accomodate my uniqueness
    In every expression of love

    Am I wrong...
    to presume that a perfect loce is awaiting
    Around the nearest corner
    Or the farthest bend

    Am I wrong...
    To anticipate trust as something expected
    Rather than an astonishing gift

    Am I wrong...
    to entertain that my "split apart"
    Is missing my presence as much
    As I, his

    Am I wrong...
    To declare love as the bonding glue
    Soldering two hearts eternally
    As love conquers all

    IF
    I am wrong...
    and being right means a world void of love
    Void of the lovers' dreams
    Leaving a nothingness of seclusion

    THEN...
    I'd rather be wrong

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    optimistic commented on Oh, To Be Wrong

    06-14-2009

    Being wrong about love would be a big challenge. I think in love there is no wrong or right while soldering two hearts eternally love cant' be wrong. This is a great peace the way you words move across the page and also the descriptiveness on love very well written.
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    hattyej

    06/14/2009

    thanks again...do hope you keep reading...feedback is very important, even though I write for pleasure.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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