Oh, To Be Wrong

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    Oh, To Be Wrong

     Am I wrong...
    To desire someone in my life's square
    to accomodate my uniqueness
    In every expression of love

    Am I wrong...
    to presume that a perfect loce is awaiting
    Around the nearest corner
    Or the farthest bend

    Am I wrong...
    To anticipate trust as something expected
    Rather than an astonishing gift

    Am I wrong...
    to entertain that my "split apart"
    Is missing my presence as much
    As I, his

    Am I wrong...
    To declare love as the bonding glue
    Soldering two hearts eternally
    As love conquers all

    IF
    I am wrong...
    and being right means a world void of love
    Void of the lovers' dreams
    Leaving a nothingness of seclusion

    THEN...
    I'd rather be wrong

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    optimistic commented on Oh, To Be Wrong

    06-14-2009

    Being wrong about love would be a big challenge. I think in love there is no wrong or right while soldering two hearts eternally love cant' be wrong. This is a great peace the way you words move across the page and also the descriptiveness on love very well written.
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    hattyej

    06/14/2009

    thanks again...do hope you keep reading...feedback is very important, even though I write for pleasure.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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