~ Original Poetry ~

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    ~ Original Poetry ~

    looking in the mirror, confused at what I see
    A woman so familliar staring back at me. 
    I step a little closer just to check and see 
    is she really there ? or is it only me?
    Through the eyes of someone else it's possible to see 
    what it takes to see myself looking back at me
    I grasp the thought and hold it tight
    in hope that I can flee from the image in the mirror right in front of me
    Now do I have the courage to tell me what I see
    Assuming that the image in the mirror's really me
     For this is what I saw in the mirror through your eyes
    A woman hardened by this life of broken dreams and lies
    She stands before her image with an elegance of grace
    Knowing that the day will come that she will leave this place
    No stranger to this life of sorrow paved with strife and loss. 
     Holding back tyhe salted tears of pain that's been her cost
    looking in the mirror as her youthfull image fades 
    she takes it all in stride knowing the price that wisdom pays. 
    Fear not dear child can't you see , for  your  words are legacy 
                       In This Original Poetry
    looking in the mirror, confused at what I see
    A woman so familiar staring back at me. 
    I step a little closer just to check and see 
    is she really there ? or is it only me?
    Through the eyes of someone else it's possible to see 
    what it takes to see myself looking back at me.
    I grasp the thought and hold it tight
    in hope that I can flee from the image in the mirror right in front of me.
    Now do I have the courage to tell me what I see?
    Assuming that the image in the mirror's really me.
     For this is what I saw in the mirror through your eyes.
    A woman hardened by this life of broken dreams and lies.
    She stands before her image with an elegance of grace.
    Knowing that the day will come that she will leave this place.
    No stranger to this life of sorrow paved with strife and loss. 
     Holding back the salted tears of pain that's been her cost.
    Looking in the mirror as her youthful image fades. 
    She takes it all in stride knowing the price that wisdom pays. 
    Fear not dear child can't you see , for  your  words are legacy 
                       In This Original Poetry

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    sandro007 commented on ~ Original Poetry ~

    08-26-2011

    This is simple marvelous... I love it!! I like the twist and turns of the words and how it all flows together.

    deni2u

    08/28/2011

    thank you sometimes its hard to put to paper what is so clear in my mind

    Sx9 commented on ~ Original Poetry ~

    08-26-2011

    love this vibes,,so true of the originality of the lines,,what more could we say than,,yes words so deep is legacy and our souls are the driver

    deni2u

    08/28/2011

    YOUR COMMENT PROVOKED PONDERING IN THE WAY THAT THIS POEM RELATES TO THANK YOU FOR READING IT

    deni2u

    08/28/2011

    ONE OF THESE DAYS I AM GONNA FIRE THAT SPELL CHECKER!!

    Sx9

    08/28/2011

    u do that,ur soul will be thankful,,

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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