waiting for you

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  • Lost Love

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    Its  always a surprise, what i thought i would never remember again. I lost most of my work in a fire   

    waiting for you
    I sit and wait and watch the lonely hours pass away, 
    Waiting for you, Oh waiting for you to return. 
    The night you left me hear alone my hopes and dreams turned to stone from waiting for you oh waiting for you to return


    Your kiss will fade your touch will die and then my love tears will subside from waiting for you oh waiting for you to return As time goes bye and years will end I swear my broken heart will mend . from waiting for you I'v waiting for you to return.







                                 Deni Le Mar
                       1976

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    gogant commented on waiting for you

    10-24-2009

    A youth's imagery can be so powerful at times....I hope the one you waited on returned with a bouquet of long-stemmed roses...if not, here's a yellow daisy......................................g
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    deni2u

    10/24/2009

    i love flowers

    TCpoeboy commented on waiting for you

    10-16-2009

    As i read this I hope that your heart will mend soon. Life is too short to hold onto hurt so long. Good short write!
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    rollerderby commented on waiting for you

    10-14-2009

    A great little sing -song my dear, Love the rhyme and meter though the subject is way to familiar. I've had my share of tears and lonely nights. I hope yours are behind you now.Well done...
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    Russ commented on waiting for you

    10-11-2009

    Wow, keep it up. Sorry for your loss. It would be hard to forget a work like this. Another strong write, truth at the end of a relationship. Well done. Thanks.
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    deni2u

    10/11/2009

    I am sure that in part or in whole I will remember the some of the words that I wrote in those younger years thank you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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