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    many changes have come about not all of them for the better but inevitable anyway.

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            The leap that I have taken

             Some would call the void

         But the place where I have landed

             is a familiar life of old

            where life has always been 

                 desolate and cold

              So with my life's regrets

            and memories I won't forget

          these choices that I have made

        I beg forgiveness before my grave.

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    gogant commented on untitled

    07-06-2010

    Hi, Deni. I'm surprised you haven't been writing more. This poem is an example of how well you do write. It's one of those, "Read Me Again" kinds that keeps getting better and better............gogant
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    kdarcy commented on untitled

    12-06-2009

    I would like to see you pull this one up to show the ebb, flow and low/high tides of life. Its a great little pile of thoughts now, I love it, even though it appears a bit incomplete to me, hence " untitled". Often times, I will title a piece before its completed to help give me focus. Be well, k
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    deni2u

    02/22/2010

    well this piece was an act of life just recently and has come full circle I am home now back on track so to speak. But my leap into the void was not without victory and I have landed once again unscathed. and truly greatfull for my bounty.......thank you K

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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