Robyn outside my window

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This was my first piece and with my acustic guitar is my favorite melody to pick

Robyn outside my window

Robin

 

 

 

Robyn outside my window

wont you help me sing a song

part of my world has ended

and the day seems oh so long

I need someone to talk to

and I need someone to care

Oh Robyn outside my window

Wont you let me know your there

He left me in the morning

when the sun kissed the sky

He left me with no warning

and I feel like I could die

If you could only help me

I know that we could win

Oh Robyn outside my window

Wont you bring him back again

Now she's took my love

And he likes the one he's found

Her voice is like a dove and he likes

the way it sounds

I need someone to talk to

and I need someone to care

 Oh Robyn outside my window

Wont let me know your there

The games that we were playing

I'd play them all again

But the odds were in his favor

 And I knew I couldn't win

I need someone to talk to  

and I need some one to care oh Robyn outside my window

wont you let me know your there  


                                                                                                             Deni LeMar
                                                                                                                 1976 

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gogant commented on Robyn outside my window

10-13-2009

Hi, Deni. I can almost see you at that window weeping for a past love...and I feel the tears you shed, perhaps in vain. If you read my poem...Sadness, go Away, you'll find it is similar, but completely different. Have fun composing and keep strummin that guitar.................................................gogant

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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