Queen of Denial

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    Ever been around someone who keeps trying to pull the wool over your eyes; as if you're some kind of unintuitive idiot who wasn't there for those other 47 times they did something dumb or moronic, and tried to blame everything and everyone (including you) for their mistakes...??? Well, this is for you....

    Queen of Denial
    D Jackson, 070509

    Trial after trial
    You’re stuck in denial
    Believing that I’ll
    Just swallow your bile
    But, you forget
    I’ll never neglect
    A sane man’s view
    Of the BS from you
    That comes my way
    As if I’ll just say
    Well, that’s okay
    Be an moron today
    And, that’s disrespect
    Of the circumspect
    ‘Cause you just don't get
    You’ve never won yet
    Most people would not
    Be so stupid to plot
    Skipping a 50# rock
    From the end of a dock

    But, you still do…

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Queen of Denial

    01-04-2010

    Telling it like it is! There's a smack talker on every block. Great use of words and rhyming.
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    laydbak1

    03/06/2010

    Thanks so much DMJ... you gottit, first try... lol

    melki18 commented on Queen of Denial

    09-24-2009

    Yeah, I think everyone knows people like this, honestly. I really don't think theres one person in this world who doesn't know another of bad character. Nice job. Great read. M3lki
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    laydbak1

    09/29/2009

    Thank you very much melki... It was just a brain burp of the moment... Nice to know that a few people actually liked it... lol...

    Tempestlady commented on Queen of Denial

    08-10-2009

    There's one in every crowd, and they nevrshut up. LOL. Could relly relate. Write on....
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    laydbak1

    08/11/2009

    Yes, there is... lol... I think everyone knows at least one of these... lol

    BridgetBowen commented on Queen of Denial

    08-06-2009

    Oh I so do know people like this. Fortunately I have outgrown trying to change them...Great read...
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    laydbak1

    08/06/2009

    LOL... Yes, I'm pretty sure we all know some of these types... Little if anything to do about em', just ignore them... Agree if necessary, just to let them think they're right, but they're never going to admit anything... lol

    jesusfreake commented on Queen of Denial

    08-03-2009

    yea yea i feel this one layd, those ones who are sneaky and coniving and think u were born yesterday....i love it...the emotion and it seems she is just oblivious to what u know about her...this is a good one..A Keeper...
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    laydbak1

    08/04/2009

    Thanks so much Blu... And, hey... I've seen women do this to each other, not just guys... I think they got less chance with them than guys...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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