" Gentle Touch "

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    " Gentle Touch "
    "Gentle Touch"



    You Caress me like the calm of a storm
    You waiver over me with such ecstasy
    If I was blind, I surely would see, by the way, you
    Caress me.

    You speak so softly, like a whisper in my ear
    When you're far away from me, your footsteps
    I cannot hear, but the tenderness of my heartbeat
    lets me know you're near.

    You should know why I love you. It isn't just because
    of you, but, because of the things you do.
    You don't kiss and tell baby, and what you do, you do
    so well.

    You got that gentle touch, the one I talk about, the one
    Smile about, I can't live without it, the touch that makes you mine.
     

    (c) Flower Girl

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    diZZle commented on " Gentle Touch "

    10-19-2009

    I lIke it! U must really have someone who makes u feel like that.
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    FlowerGirl

    10/22/2009

    Hi diZZle, Thank you So Much For Your Comment! I Wrote This Poem A Long Time Ago. And Yes, At That Time, The Person, Whom I Was With Did Inspire Me To Write This. I Believe That Each Person We're With Does Something, Unique, And Special In Their Own Way For Us As We Share Our Lives With Them... May You Always Experience Love In A Way That Makes You Feel Loved And Special... Wishing You Much Encouragement And Inspiration.. Flower Girl,

    modica3 commented on " Gentle Touch "

    09-27-2009

    i must say u have alot of poems and i would say this is one of the top 20
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    FlowerGirl

    09/28/2009

    Really! Smiling! Because, This Poem, Of My Many Poems, Is Also A Favorite Of Mine.. And, I Glad You Share That Same Thought! I Believe That When We Share Ourselves With Someone We Love, It Should Feel Like This!! Wishing You Everything Good And Positive For Life Now And Always!! Flower Girl,

    SILKYTWEED commented on " Gentle Touch "

    06-23-2009

    Impressive Write...very sensual FlowerGirl, this is a side I had not yet experienced, you are intriguing....I sense levels of love and beauty echoing from you and your writes and I also sense that you are just scraping your full capacity of creativity and that your soul has much to share with the world and I look forward to experiencing parts of you through these wonderful writes, who are you? (smile) You have a very divinely presence about you and your writes....
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    FlowerGirl

    06/24/2009

    Thank You For The Compliment. Ummmm.... You Sense All That From Me, Well, From What I Sense About you, I'm Not Surprised! You To Are In Tune With Yourself! And have A Grrreat Way Of Expressing It! (Smile) Your Turn!Altho, I've Been Writing For Years, You Are Quite right. I am Scraping The Surface of My Creativity. And,I Am Sooooooo...... Lovin It! Seriously Tho, I Have A Lot To Learn While Tapping Within. But, You, Have To Admit, Isn't It Interesting While Search Within, Discovering What We Will Come Up With Next? Who Am I, You Ask? Well, Right Back Atcha! Smile! On The Surface I like A lot of The Same Things As Most People. Probably want Some Of The Same Things From life, But, If Someone was To Get A lot Closer To Me Than The Surface, Would Probably Say, I Was Really Different But (A Good Different)At Least That's What I've Aways Been Told. Because, Of The Way I Think And Feel About Things Concerning Life, Etc. But, I accept The Fact That, altho Some People Are of With Different, Some Are Not! Which Is Ok, Cause, I Have To Be Who I am Anyway. I'm Happy That You Enjoy'd This Write A Divine Presence? Well, My Poems Are Only A Part Of Who I Am, The Rest Can't Be Put Into A Few Short Words. It Would Take An Eternity To Answer That One! Smile Till Next Time.....

    optimistic commented on " Gentle Touch "

    05-16-2009

    Great poem
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    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi, How are you, doing Wonderful I hope. Thank you for your positive comment you gave for my poem. I love to write. In your Biography, you mentioned something about Fake Friends. I have a poem posted called " Special Kinda Friend. maybe when you get a chance, you could read it. I read a few of your Poems, and I think there Great! Keep up the Good Work, Be Always Encouraged. And Be Blessed!

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi again, I'm new to this site. Somehow, I posted my comment too many times. Sorry for that, I'm trying to erase it but had no luck doin so will try to find out how.

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi again, I'm new to this site. Somehow, I posted my comment too many times. Sorry for that, I'm trying to erase it but had no luck doin so will try to find out how.

    FlowerGirl

    05/29/2009

    Hi again, I'm new to this site. Somehow, I posted my comment too many times. Sorry for that, I'm trying to erase it but had no luck doin so will try to find out how.

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