Re-Birth

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    Re-Birth

    The flowers burn brighter,
    as I grow closer,
    The heat singes my skin,
    it melts it away to the bone,
    I yearn to breath as my face begins to turn blue,
    I run with faith as my life sheds away the skin,
    No more laughing Jackols who stalk my Apathy,
    No more daisy's being placed on my grave

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    LDSforlife commented on Re-Birth

    08-27-2009

    This is pretty good. but it doesn't feel complete. The first thing that comes to mind for the last line is "I am free!"

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    Re-Birth 1
    Non-Existence 1
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