sad

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    • Smileey11
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    sad
    can you see the pain in my eyes?
    can you see all the tears i've cried?
    can you see my hands as they clench in the sheets?
    can you see me bite my lip because it hurts to breathe?
    can you see how my heart is twisting in my chest?
    can you see my lungs as I am catching my last breath?
    do you see as my lips turn blue?
    did you hear as i called out for you?
    DID YOU HEAR AS I CALLED OUT FOR YOU????
    do you feel my skin turn clammy and cold?
    no... you couldn't. cuz i died all alone


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    Vincent commented on sad

    11-13-2009

    A good piece, sounds like there is a sub plot. smiles Vincent
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    Paradice21 commented on sad

    11-30-2008

    Touching.
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