unfinished

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    unfinished

     Thank you for reading my poetry
    you will soon know me better than my family
    I will let you see into my darkest nights
    let you see my most cherished treasures
    and all the while trying to make it all sound clever
    I will let you in on my apirations
    and show you all the places i find inspiration
    ranging from encounters to my shower tile
    all while i write with my secret seductive smile
    to write is almost to plot
     

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    Paradice21 commented on unfinished

    11-30-2009

    Short, yet this seems so Heartfelt..... I love the title.... A Very nice piece!!‎
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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