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    • Smileey11
    • Back on here! Haven't been on in awhile and can't wait to share new poems! Also, to read the beautiful magic others have created!

    unanswered

    I laid my head back, and looked up at the sky
    I just laid there, couldn't understand why
    I know I have friends, but I still feel alone
    Even though things are better, even at home
    I lay here and feel, like I'm not all that unique
    What is it I've really achieved
    What could anyone really see in me
    As I lay there I feel the wind
    I see the sway of the trees
    I see the clouds passing while I try to find clarity
    So I think about the good and the bad
    Pros and cons
    But it gets confusing as the lists go on
    It's crazy how I can lay completely still
    While my thoughts swirl and spill
    How the mind can be vast, and open
    Yet get me no closer, to answering my questions

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    Paradice21 commented on unanswered

    12-07-2009

    Well this one is Very Beuatiful....... In a class of it's on! Loved it!!

    ltroxell commented on unanswered

    03-15-2009

    really brings forth the confusion and uncertainty that takes hold of each of us at times.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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