Silvery white ashes blowing high in the sky.
Scatteredyet not forgotten
floating upon the wings
of wind in our mind.
Silvery white ashes blowing high in the sky.
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Tags: My Feelings
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Actually this poem was written May 22, 2008 long before my mothers passing. But never shared it until now.yet not forgotten
floating upon the wings
of wind in our mind.
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carynontherhine commented on Silvery white ashes blowing high in the sky.
10-12-2010
- Oh this one really touched me beyond repair right now. I think these few lines are more memorable then a fifty word poem. I not only love it but its in my fav's and is where it will stay. Sad but reality of death does crash someone to their knees with sorrow of missing them. This line Paint is overcoming with touching words. scattered yet not forgotten. All I can say is I love it! A perfect ten from me and thank you for the memory you instilled in me today of my mother. Hugz
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