Winter disrobes

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    Love the winter night blanket of snow sparkling in the nigh.t

    Winter disrobes
    Again ..winter has disrobed-bare our view
    shedding those spicey hues of Autum...claiming the once emerald covered trees
    amber skies of night are peppered with circling black birds.

    winds....repeated play those woeful tunes amid naked
    tree branches.
    Glittering diamonds decend from heaven quickly yet
    quietly  they spread.

    Throwing their blanket of white upon the sleeping
    ground......footprints  appears with no-one direction
    in mind..yet never ending
    warm breath plays pee-a-boo games in the cold
    breezes

    Warm summer days have become frozen water ways
    which no longer lap again the edges of the shore.

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    carynontherhine commented on Winter disrobes

    11-12-2010

    Wow Paint, this is awesome!! The descriptions you use to bring the tone of the seasons changing.I love the line of Warm Summer days have become frozen water ways no longer lap again the edges of the shore. Brilliant, simply a beautiful write that brings the reader into the write and feeling the change happening. Great Paint and Hugz
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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